从初稿到反馈
Many companies now let staff work from home. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Working from home saves employees hours of travel every week. It also gives parents more time with their children. However, some staff feel lonely without colleagues, and this is a big problem for big companies.
四项评分标准逐条点评，再给你下一步
下面是一份样例。你的 PDF 会针对你自己的作文来写，这道题的范文也在同一页。
Writing Task 2
Governments should spend more on public transport than on new roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that governments should spend more money on public transport than on building new roads. I strongly agree with this view, because buses and trains help more people and protect the environment.
Firstly, public transport can move a huge number of people at once. This makes cities less crowded. In addition, a huge investment in roads often brings more cars, not fewer.
Notes on each criterion
| Criterion | Comment |
|---|---|
| Task Response | You answer both parts of the question. |
| Coherence and Cohesion | Paragraphs are clear. Vary your linking words. |
| Lexical Resource | Good topic words. Avoid repeating "huge". |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | Check articles before plural nouns. |
Teacher's note
A clear essay with a strong opening. For your next one, support each main idea with one real example.
批改样例，仅供参考。
和老师视频，练真实口语
从老师的可约时间里选一个空档。同一时间只能有一节待上的课。
也可以把它加进全真模考，当作口语部分。
November 2026
30-minute slots为什么要真人来读
老师能指出这一段好在哪里，下一段该改什么。没有一篇作文交给机器打分。
观点
论点清楚吗？每个分论点都扣题吗？
结构
段落之间，能不能把读者从第一个观点顺畅带到最后一个？
语气
用词是否符合学术写作的语体？
批改和口语课，都用积分付
需要时再买一个积分包。
50
积分
作文批改
大小作文放在一起看
100
积分
口语课
一次真人视频，30 分钟
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